March 18, 2009 - Week 5
It feels like we are finally settling into a rhythm with the Fieldworks as everyone continues with their various works in progress.
Tonight song lyrics, poetry, a short story, and photography were presented.
Some responses I had to the works presented:
-intriguing cadence/rhythm
-interested in character's plight
-felt character's frustration
-where is the pressure s/he feels coming from?
-cheering for character, even if resolution is not his/her destiny
-still processing piece
-very visual
-decoy, alibi, and cover story struck me
-how much ~do~ people consider their choice of words with which to adorn themselves/their cars?
Responses to my work that stood out:
-spiritual ritual
-border town
-contrast
-warmth
-repetition
-story of lovers on first date
-light projected versus light within
-AVS
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